Rate my resume on a scale of 1 to 10...and suggest scope of improvements..?

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PRESENT:
17-1-182/D/63,
Mumtaz Colony, Santosh Nagar,
Hyderabad, Andhra Pradesh
India 500059
Ph. [phone]
[e-mail]



PERMANENT:
17-1-182/D/63,
Mumtaz Colony, Santosh Nagar,
Hyderabad, Andhra Pradesh
India 500059
Ph. [phone]
arshadahmad1986


OBJECTIVE: Seeking a position to utilize my skills and abilities in Mechanical Engineering Industry that offers professional growth while being resourceful, innovative and flexible.


SUMMARY: Primary career experience is mechanical engineering supported by a degree from Nagpur University, Maharashtra, India. The mechanical engineering work experience is varied from Field operation and Panel Engineering at Reliance Industries Limited, India to Product Design for General Electric, Louisville, KY, USA. Responsibilities have varied and increased with experience in Fortune 500 Companies. Also an experienced web developer with background in design, development, programming and marketing.


EDUCATION: Bachelor of Engineering in Mechanical Engineering, June 2007
Nagpur University, Maharashtra, India
Ranked 2nd in College with an aggregate of 68%.

Higher Secondary from Central Board of Secondary Education,
May 2003
Kendriya Vidyalaya, Vayu Sena Nagar, Nagpur, Maharashtra, India
Secured an aggregate of 82%.

Secondary School from Central Board of Secondary Education,
May 2001
D.A.V. Public School, Dhanbad, Jharkhand, India
Ranked 1st in school with an aggregate of 87%.




EXPERIENCE: Technical Consultant Design Engineer
GE-IDC, Satyam Computer Services Limited,
Hyderabad, India December 2007 till date

• On Contract employee of General Electric, GE C&I, Louisville, KY, USA.
• Involved in New Product Innovation (NPI) and Product cost take out (PCTO)
Projects for Home Laundry, Dishwasher and Cleaning Products
• Involved in Design for Six Sigma and Value Engineering. Successfully delivered a number of CAD requests.

Field Operation and Panel Engineer at
Indian Petrochemical Corporation Limited (IPCL)
Now Reliance Industries Limited (RIL), Bharuch, Gujrat, India
September- December 2007

• Underwent training at Gandhar Petrochemical Complex Gas Cracker Unit (GCU)
• Worked hands on from Field operation to Engineering tasks – both in the Field, Panel Rooms & Technical services
• Preventive maintenance of pumps, turbines, reactors etc.


ACTIVITIES: • Member, American Society of Mechanical Engineers, 2006-2008
• Member, India Society of Technical Education, 2004-2007
• Certified by Central Institute of Tool Design, Hyderabad, India in Pro/E Wildfire 4.0
• Project on study of Kinematics of Robotic Manipulator
• Project on Implementation of ISO 9001:2000 in Small Scale Industries, MIDC, Maharashtra
• Seminar on Rapid Prototyping Technology
• Selected by Indian Naval Academy Service Selection Board
• Actively involved in social services and Corporate Social Responsibility at
Satyam Foundation, Satyam Computer Services Limited.
• Underwent Training at Western Coal Fields Limited Coal Washery, WCL
Madhya Pradesh, India
• Case study on Inventory Management at Western CoalFields Limited, Madhya Pradesh, India.



COMPUTER PROFICIENCIES:
• Pro/E WildFire 4.0 • AutoCAD 2005
• ASP.Net • SQL Server 2005
• MS Office • C, C++, C#




PERSONAL SKILLS:
• Leadership
• Team Work
• Problem Solving
• Resource Management
• Effective Communication
• Effective Customer Relations




REFERENCES: • Prof.S.R.Kulkarni,
Training and Placement Officer,
Priyadarshini College of Engineering, Nagpur
Maharashtra, India
Ph. [phone]

• Mr.Abdut Tauab.
Retd.Dy.Chief Mining Engineer,
Western Coalfields Limited,
Coal India Limited
Ph. [phone]






DECLARATION:

I hereby declare that, to the best of my knowledge and belief, the particular given above and the
declarations made therein are true and accurate.


Arshad Ahmad

Date:
Place: Hyderabad, India

Answer 1

Your address should only appear once, not twice; it is the same so just consolidate it by saying Permanent address.



Remove the reference names and addresses and put "References available on request." Then put them on a separate sheet and give them out at the interview.



Remove the secondary school education entries. Not necessary.



Remove the Declaration. Also not necessary.



Remove the personal skills entry as well. Save that for the interview.



Otherwise, this is very good. As a personal preference, I would remove the "objective" as well (since you have a summary), and save it for the cover letter, but you don't have to--that's optional.



Good luck to you in your job search!

Answer 2

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Rate my resume on a scale of 1 to 10...and suggest scope of improvements..?

PRESENT:

17-1-182/D/63,

Mumtaz Colony, Santosh Nagar,

Hyderabad, Andhra Pradesh

India 500059

Ph. [phone]

[e-mail]







PERMANENT:

17-1-182/D/63,

Mumtaz Colony, Santosh Nagar,

Hyderabad, Andhra Pradesh

India 500059

Ph....

Answer 3

7

Answer 4

8

Answer 5

can you place your dates in a neater chronological sequence - so as an employer I could see clearly where you started and where you've been - your dates are sometime in the start and then in the middle. you've lots of experiential stuff there - but - it's confusing and your personal skills are limited to bullet points - you need to sell yourself - not list yourself. 6/10

Answer 6

Very impressive resume, Arshad. Why not state just one address since they are identical. Also, would it be to your advantage to identify a U.S. reference at G.E.? Good luck.

Answer 7

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Answer 8

it may work for India, but not the US.....sorry, but I can even give you a ( 0 ); too much confusion, you need to find a resume "EXPERT" to help you clean it up.